What do you think of my story and poem?

Question by rockylad_75: What do you think of my story and poem?
The Life-Exchanger Machine
One day Penny was swimming in the river when she saw a life-exchanger machine in the river. It looked like a calculator, but it has no numbers, it has letters, a screen, and a go button. She was surprised when she saw it. She suddenly went home and did not tell anyone about it. She typed in the machine the word dog. Penny did turn into a dog, her favourite animal. Penny experienced eating dog food.

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